One folly
Just one time
I wanted to know the taste of pure surrender
It was curiosity, ill-fated
But so tempting, I just couldn’t resist.
There’ll be the world to pay.
I will.
And keep the memory and the metaphor
“As beautiful as sin”
I was Eve for a day. And Paradise, my temporary stop.
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1Gauravonomics
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 16:22
Kya hua?
2khush
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 17:21
Its good to smudge oneself with the dirt of longing and then bask in the breeze of satisfaction at having been able to live an experience.
3n
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 17:39
best use of 55 words i’ve seen in a long time
4Brad
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 19:46
You are BACK!!!
5sundar
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 20:21
life is beautiful and never sinful…what adds to it’s beauty is the fact that one never meets the same river twice…a dynamic in constant flow, evolving , mutating along the way..every moment, an experience..
6IdeaSmith
wrote on 26 September 2006 at 20:57
@ Khush: That’s an artistic thought with poetic expression.
Teleute has a list of 55-word stories…have you seen them?
@ n: Thank you!
@ Brad: I didn’t move a muscle!
7Perspective Inc
wrote on 27 September 2006 at 8:24
Nice!
8Apoorva
wrote on 27 September 2006 at 9:48
Does this mean you walked around naked in some Garden named Eden and offered Apples to men who could possibly have been nude?
9IdeaSmith
wrote on 27 September 2006 at 10:18
Apoorva: Finally you deign to visit my new blog!!!! As for your question….”Ideasmith smiles enigmatically”
10Apoorva
wrote on 27 September 2006 at 10:36
Do not confuse my silence for my absence. I was always here! =D
11IdeaSmith
wrote on 27 September 2006 at 12:28
@ Apoo: Heard and understood, sir. How you? And what do you say to the comment I left behind on your blog yesterday?
12Ravi
wrote on 9 October 2006 at 1:46
Hmmm, it feels great when you have found Adam right, or rather when you feel so.