One folly
Just one time
I wanted to know the taste of pure surrender
It was curiosity, ill-fated
But so tempting, I just couldn’t resist.
There’ll be the world to pay.
I will.
And keep the memory and the metaphor
“As beautiful as sin”
I was Eve for a day. And Paradise, my temporary stop.
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Tags: 55-word, Hell, Metaphor, Sin, Surrender
Posted in Waxing eloquent | Comments (12)
September 26th, 2006 at 4:22 pm
Kya hua?
September 26th, 2006 at 5:21 pm
Its good to smudge oneself with the dirt of longing and then bask in the breeze of satisfaction at having been able to live an experience.
September 26th, 2006 at 5:39 pm
best use of 55 words i’ve seen in a long time
September 26th, 2006 at 7:46 pm
You are BACK!!!
September 26th, 2006 at 8:21 pm
life is beautiful and never sinful…what adds to it’s beauty is the fact that one never meets the same river twice…a dynamic in constant flow, evolving , mutating along the way..every moment, an experience..
September 26th, 2006 at 8:57 pm
@ Khush: That’s an artistic thought with poetic expression.
Teleute has a list of 55-word stories…have you seen them?
@ n: Thank you!
@ Brad: I didn’t move a muscle!
September 27th, 2006 at 8:24 am
Nice!
September 27th, 2006 at 9:48 am
Does this mean you walked around naked in some Garden named Eden and offered Apples to men who could possibly have been nude?
September 27th, 2006 at 10:18 am
Apoorva: Finally you deign to visit my new blog!!!! As for your question….”Ideasmith smiles enigmatically”
September 27th, 2006 at 10:36 am
Do not confuse my silence for my absence. I was always here! =D
September 27th, 2006 at 12:28 pm
@ Apoo: Heard and understood, sir. How you? And what do you say to the comment I left behind on your blog yesterday?
October 9th, 2006 at 1:46 am
Hmmm, it feels great when you have found Adam right, or rather when you feel so.