En route to hell

Tuesday, 26 September 2006, 13:08

| Category : 55ers, Poetry
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One folly
Just one time
I wanted to know the taste of pure surrender

It was curiosity, ill-fated
But so tempting, I just couldn’t resist.

There’ll be the world to pay.
I will.
And keep the memory and the metaphor

“As beautiful as sin”

I was Eve for a day. And Paradise, my temporary stop.

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12 idea-filings for “En route to hell”

  1. 1GauravonomicsNo Gravatar

    Kya hua?

  2. 2khushNo Gravatar

    Its good to smudge oneself with the dirt of longing and then bask in the breeze of satisfaction at having been able to live an experience.

  3. 3nNo Gravatar

    best use of 55 words i’ve seen in a long time

  4. 4BradNo Gravatar

    You are BACK!!! :D

  5. 5sundarNo Gravatar

    life is beautiful and never sinful…what adds to it’s beauty is the fact that one never meets the same river twice…a dynamic in constant flow, evolving , mutating along the way..every moment, an experience..

  6. 6IdeaSmithNo Gravatar

    @ Khush: That’s an artistic thought with poetic expression.
    @ n: Thank you! :) Teleute has a list of 55-word stories…have you seen them?
    @ Brad: I didn’t move a muscle! :o

  7. 7Perspective IncNo Gravatar

    Nice!

  8. 8ApoorvaNo Gravatar

    Does this mean you walked around naked in some Garden named Eden and offered Apples to men who could possibly have been nude?

  9. 9IdeaSmithNo Gravatar

    Apoorva: Finally you deign to visit my new blog!!!! As for your question….”Ideasmith smiles enigmatically”

  10. 10ApoorvaNo Gravatar

    Do not confuse my silence for my absence. I was always here! =D

  11. 11IdeaSmithNo Gravatar

    @ Apoo: Heard and understood, sir. How you? And what do you say to the comment I left behind on your blog yesterday?

  12. 12RaviNo Gravatar

    Hmmm, it feels great when you have found Adam right, or rather when you feel so.

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