Comments on: Love and longing in Mumbai

By: ideasmith

ideasmith — Sun, 06 May 2007 08:46:20 +0000

@ Brad: There is a reason we are A.E.s

@ PensiveLawyer: Hugz for the tears, love, didn’t mean to make you cry.

@ Pragni: We do, actually. Each time I write a poem I feel very ‘pat-me-on-the-back’ proud of, he comes by and casually tops it off by a comment-poem of his own!

@ Manuscrypts: Fourplay? Intriguing…on my way!

@ rax1: Sometimes poetry is more beautiful than real life.

By: rax1

rax1 — Thu, 03 May 2007 15:41:08 +0000

i love the ending.

By: manuscrypts

manuscrypts — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 06:31:47 +0000

scond life..good stuff.. and have you read the book? meanwhile drop in for some fourplay at my blog

By: pragni

pragni — Fri, 27 Apr 2007 14:12:23 +0000

Idea- You and Brad should try writing poetry together. I think that would turn up awesome pieces.

Brad- No words to describe your last lines. Its that good.

By: pensivelawyer

pensivelawyer — Fri, 27 Apr 2007 12:39:53 +0000

Dammit, i’m crying!

By: ricercer

ricercer — Thu, 26 Apr 2007 17:23:04 +0000

sweet! very different and i like the perspective … both in the snap and in the words. very nice, really!

By: Brad

Brad — Thu, 26 Apr 2007 17:11:40 +0000

And if ever you have to break up,
Do break up with me in my sleep,
For then, if ever, when I get up,
I just shall remember you as one sweet dream.

By: DC

DC — Thu, 26 Apr 2007 08:59:45 +0000

The pic is stunning. Blurry bright lights and a winding road.

By: Shreyasi

Shreyasi — Thu, 26 Apr 2007 08:14:56 +0000

So touching and beautiful