I’d fall in love with you, in any lifetime
If I lived my life over again, I’d fall in love with you again.
I don’t know that.
All I can say is
Right now, this way
With you, being you
And me, being myself
There’s no way I would not fall in love with you.
~o~o~o~o~o~o~o~o~o~
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And for everyone who wondered and asked (and didn’t ask), the last post was fiction, this one is belief.
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Posted in 55-worders, Idea ore, Waxing eloquent | Comments (15)
January 3rd, 2007 at 2:43 pm
I was among those who wanted to ask but dint… coz i dint want to interfere in your personal life.. coz i dont think i m close enough to.. anyway most love is tht way… regret rein.. meaning you hardly regret anything when in that state of mind. Rather it’s always that if you were to live ur life again, you’d welcome it with open arms.. it’s coz you learn too muchto forsake the experience.. i think..
January 3rd, 2007 at 3:15 pm
@ Pragni:
If you’re a blogger and you’re reading it, you can ask! I mean…if its THAT personal, I just won’t put it up on a public space. Or I’ll say it differently. I like how you’ve expressed your last line.
January 4th, 2007 at 12:49 am
I really like those posts… In just a few words, you have the talent to say things than can move people…
things that find an echo in people’s heart…
things that are so true…
January 4th, 2007 at 7:23 pm
@ Someone: Thank you, love. I wish ’someone’ would share their thoughts with us too.
January 5th, 2007 at 2:11 am
All I can say is
Me, being myself,
Only with myself,
Or with you,
There is no way I will not accept that I love you.
It is only once one can love, completely, without strings.
January 5th, 2007 at 10:00 am
It is only once one can love, completely, without strings
For every other time,
when you hurt,
you withdraw,
to ponder, to muse, to see your reflection
in the pooled sorrow
and wonder at the perfection
that was, or so you thought
till on the morrow
neither, you, nor the hurt, and naught the reflection stay
January 5th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
Gosh!!! u write such amazing posts. U touch something deep down the heart,ur posts evoke those feelings which we often shove into deep dark recesses of our minds n constantly deny it’s existence.
January 6th, 2007 at 3:08 am
neither, you, nor the hurt, and naught the reflection stay
what stays is the bliss, of making love without touch,
Smile telling the ecstasy,
Eyes telling the passion, breadth heard by ears,
Lips licking desire, your words being spoken to you,
Calmed for your hidden fears, without you having to tell them out.
It is not only for the moment that you will love. You will love for every moment ever, but maybe never accept it aloud.
January 6th, 2007 at 8:34 am
happy new year’s, hon. looking forward to more stellar writing. xx.
January 6th, 2007 at 9:22 am
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January 6th, 2007 at 1:41 pm
It is not only for the moment you will love
You will love for every moment ever, but maybe never accept it aloud
For all those moments of truth, love, ecstasy
of whisperings amidst the heartbeats loud
of touch, smiles, kisses and dreams
to eternal bliss, lead they perhaps could
love afterall is for every moment ever
but maybe never
Ever will you accept it aloud
Nor act on it as your per your desire
Nor close to your chest hold
Memories of laughs, hearts on fire
they under go a shroud
While with your waking eye
you walk through your life
Afraid of the dream in sight
keeping company to strife
And still the laughs abound
in spite of the nagging sound
saying you wish you had loved for ever
and accepted it aloud
January 6th, 2007 at 4:33 pm
@ Anonymous and Peeyush: I’m enjoying this comments-in-poetry conversation the two of you are having. Just interrupting to tell you both you’re MAGNIFICENT with the words!!
@ Confusedsoul: I think you’ll find the comments section of my posts even more interesting!
@ Illyria: Thanks! And a great 2007 to you too! Happy blogging as well…
January 7th, 2007 at 2:10 am
@IS,
Thank you, we enjoys it too. And, if I may add, you are better to have inspired so many and more words.
January 7th, 2007 at 2:38 am
Nice!
January 8th, 2007 at 8:30 am
so few words, sooo much meaning behind them! am always amazed at how you do it!
a happy new year to you!