Comments on: No promises

By: perspective inc

perspective inc — Mon, 08 Jan 2007 03:00:22 +0000

so few words, sooo much meaning behind them! am always amazed at how you do it!
a happy new year to you!

By: Kishore

Kishore — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 21:08:30 +0000

Nice!

By: peeyush

peeyush — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 20:40:17 +0000

@IS,

Thank you, we enjoys it too. And, if I may add, you are better to have inspired so many and more words.

By: ideasmith

ideasmith — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 11:03:01 +0000

@ Anonymous and Peeyush: I’m enjoying this comments-in-poetry conversation the two of you are having. Just interrupting to tell you both you’re MAGNIFICENT with the words!!

@ Confusedsoul: I think you’ll find the comments section of my posts even more interesting!

@ Illyria: Thanks! And a great 2007 to you too! Happy blogging as well…

By: Peeyush

Peeyush — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 08:11:47 +0000

It is not only for the moment you will love
You will love for every moment ever, but maybe never accept it aloud
For all those moments of truth, love, ecstasy
of whisperings amidst the heartbeats loud
of touch, smiles, kisses and dreams
to eternal bliss, lead they perhaps could
love afterall is for every moment ever
but maybe never

Ever will you accept it aloud
Nor act on it as your per your desire
Nor close to your chest hold
Memories of laughs, hearts on fire
they under go a shroud

While with your waking eye
you walk through your life
Afraid of the dream in sight
keeping company to strife
And still the laughs abound
in spite of the nagging sound
saying you wish you had loved for ever
and accepted it aloud

By: No promises « Comfort Zone

No promises « Comfort Zone — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 03:52:55 +0000

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By: {illyria}

{illyria} — Sat, 06 Jan 2007 03:04:25 +0000

happy new year’s, hon. looking forward to more stellar writing. xx.

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Fri, 05 Jan 2007 21:38:45 +0000

neither, you, nor the hurt, and naught the reflection stay
what stays is the bliss, of making love without touch,
Smile telling the ecstasy,
Eyes telling the passion, breadth heard by ears,
Lips licking desire, your words being spoken to you,
Calmed for your hidden fears, without you having to tell them out.

It is not only for the moment that you will love. You will love for every moment ever, but maybe never accept it aloud.

By: confusedsoul

confusedsoul — Fri, 05 Jan 2007 17:32:48 +0000

Gosh!!! u write such amazing posts. U touch something deep down the heart,ur posts evoke those feelings which we often shove into deep dark recesses of our minds n constantly deny it’s existence.

By: Peeyush

Peeyush — Fri, 05 Jan 2007 04:30:18 +0000

It is only once one can love, completely, without strings

For every other time,
when you hurt,
you withdraw,
to ponder, to muse, to see your reflection
in the pooled sorrow
and wonder at the perfection
that was, or so you thought
till on the morrow
neither, you, nor the hurt, and naught the reflection stay