Secret Crush

Saturday, 26 March 2005, 20:33

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Yesterday you asked me who it was
…who was the cause for my new look
…whose attention was I trying to catch
…who was giving me dreams that made me smile

What else would you ask me if I spoke your name in reply each time?

Would you change if I said I was falling
and hoping you’d be there to catch me
as you have been these past few months?

Would you stay if I never said goodbye?
Would your words flow forever if I didn’t break the conversation this time?
Would you laugh if I told you your laughter warms my heart?
…And lights up the moment with appreciation and understanding…would it make you blush?

Would you smile secretly to yourself if I dropped you a broad hint instead?
And pretend you hadn’t heard just to hear me call your name again?

Perhaps you would…or maybe you won’t.
I sense you would want to anyway.
So I won’t say a thing.

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12 idea-filings for “Secret Crush”

  1. 1induscreepNo Gravatar

    Brilliant brilliant poem.

  2. 2ideasmithNo Gravatar

    @ Induscreep: Thank you!

  3. 3someonearbitNo Gravatar

    Stunning

  4. 4ideasmithNo Gravatar

    @ Someonearbit: :-) Thank you.

  5. 5its me a shadowNo Gravatar

    hm..
    great!

  6. 6BethNo Gravatar

    It’s perfect :)

  7. 7Ms TaggartNo Gravatar

    Hmm.. this one’s a beauty too… You have a way with words.. :)

    Ms Taggarts last idea: A woman should have…

  8. 8ArcopolNo Gravatar

    Comment for the text – Lovely.
    Comment for the context – Hmmmmmmmmmmm :)

  9. 9ArpzNo Gravatar

    bon, tres bon

    Arpzs last idea: Embittered

  10. 10Ms TaggartNo Gravatar

    Cute and neat! Very sweet!

    Ms Taggarts last idea: WOMM!

  11. 11DCNo Gravatar

    Fiction?
    :P
    Very cute.

  12. 12IdeaSmithNo Gravatar

    @arcopol: Heh. ;-)

    @Arpz: Merci beaucoup!

    @Ms Taggart: :-)

    @DC: All fiction is based on fact. This one is from 4years back.

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