Secret Crush
Yesterday you asked me who it was
…who was the cause for my new look
…whose attention was I trying to catch
…who was giving me dreams that made me smile
What else would you ask me if I spoke your name in reply each time?
Would you change if I said I was falling
and hoping you’d be there to catch me
as you have been these past few months?
Would you stay if I never said goodbye?
Would your words flow forever if I didn’t break the conversation this time?
Would you laugh if I told you your laughter warms my heart?
…And lights up the moment with appreciation and understanding…would it make you blush?
Would you smile secretly to yourself if I dropped you a broad hint instead?
And pretend you hadn’t heard just to hear me call your name again?
Perhaps you would…or maybe you won’t.
I sense you would want to anyway.
So I won’t say a thing.























1induscreep
wrote on 20 December 2006 at 1:21
Brilliant brilliant poem.
2ideasmith
wrote on 20 December 2006 at 11:35
@ Induscreep: Thank you!
3someonearbit
wrote on 9 January 2007 at 9:32
Stunning
4ideasmith
wrote on 9 January 2007 at 10:19
@ Someonearbit:
Thank you.
5its me a shadow
wrote on 23 February 2007 at 15:35
hm..
great!
6Beth
wrote on 23 May 2007 at 5:55
It’s perfect
7Ms Taggart
wrote on 16 January 2009 at 18:48
Hmm.. this one’s a beauty too… You have a way with words..
Ms Taggarts last idea: A woman should have…
8Arcopol
wrote on 10 June 2009 at 11:15
Comment for the text – Lovely.
Comment for the context – Hmmmmmmmmmmm
9Arpz
wrote on 10 June 2009 at 11:30
bon, tres bon
Arpzs last idea: Embittered
10Ms Taggart
wrote on 10 June 2009 at 14:11
Cute and neat! Very sweet!
Ms Taggarts last idea: WOMM!
11DC
wrote on 10 June 2009 at 14:38
Fiction?

Very cute.
12IdeaSmith
wrote on 10 June 2009 at 17:46
@arcopol: Heh.
@Arpz: Merci beaucoup!
@Ms Taggart:
@DC: All fiction is based on fact. This one is from 4years back.