SMS
Monday, August 18, 2008 13:041:25 a.m. is more Saturday night than Sunday morning, no matter what the calendar says.
After a day of light drizzle or no rain, the clouds let themselves go again. For a few seconds all I can hear is the rain. Not the sound the ground makes as the water hits it, nor the metal and glass and concrete shrugging off droplets. Just the sound of the rain.
And perhaps because it’s raining, Bombay is quiet outside my window, even on a Saturday night.
I pick up my phone and thumb out,
I guess you are in sleepy-bye land. It’s pouring outside my window and so the road is quiet for a Saturday night. A good time to be alone and watching the world sleep. Know what I mean? Tell me in the a.m. when you are awake and I’m not.
When I talk, I wonder if the person listening, gets what I’m saying.
After awhile when I know they do, I listen appreciatively and in anticipation for them to validate that impression.
I savour their silence,
allowing me to speak
as I know I will
let them taste my silence
with their words, shortly.
So if listening in silence is really just giving the other person a space to speak…
what else is sleep
but giving them the space to be themselves,
without you,
examining the world around
and picking what they want to bring back to you…
…and letting you do the same?
Truly, my lovely solitude is sweetened by thoughts of you.










scribblers inc
says:
August 18th, 2008 at 2:30 pm
hey whats up??guess you are completely caught up in the solitude phase!!
scribblers incs last blog post..Snap back to reality…
A Cynic in Wonderland
says:
August 18th, 2008 at 3:48 pm
The sounds of silence yes. Ever tried hearing it on a seashore? Wonderful feeling.
Adithya
says:
August 18th, 2008 at 5:03 pm
Beautiful.
When you SMS, the person reading, gets what you’re saying?
Adithyas last blog post..Boredom and all his Friends
Ms Taggart
says:
August 20th, 2008 at 3:42 pm
I sooo wish this piece of work is not fiction.. I wish you actually wrote it for someone, and it makes me feel great that someone is so happy in love!
Ms Taggarts last blog post..Aaah… Pottery!
IdeaSmith
says:
September 10th, 2008 at 11:17 am
@ scribblers inc: I enjoy my company as much as other people do!
@ Cynic: Yes…
@ Adithya: In this case, they did.
@ Ms Taggart: Even fiction is inspired by some reality.