Vapour
When I leave,
I tip-toe out quietly
So that you won’t miss me
till I’m too far away
for you to remember what you’re looking for
And also so you’ll never realise
that I started walking
long before you stopped talking.
Call me ruthless
Call me sensitive
Call me an escapist…or a realist.
The only thing I leave behind is a question mark.
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July 15th, 2005 at 4:54 am
Beautiful!
July 15th, 2005 at 4:36 pm
hi! that was beautiful!
July 15th, 2005 at 9:19 pm
I am glad that you are writing poems again. ^_^
Loved this, especially the ending (with the bang).
July 17th, 2005 at 11:22 am
I’ve read this 4 times since the last 10 mins when i saw it.That’s all i’d say.That’s all i need to say.
And even though the question may not know its answer, the answer would always know its question….maybe it’s just a matter of time.Afterall, there has to be something after the question mark, before the full stop comes along.
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July 19th, 2005 at 5:07 pm
I’ve also had to reread it. Very deep with many hidden meanings. Great work Smithy!
July 22nd, 2005 at 5:33 am
Nice
June 6th, 2008 at 8:42 am
Yes, I too !!
Reread it again to understand meanings !
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June 6th, 2008 at 8:57 am
Yes, call me an escapist, but years later when the memories get a little blurrier, here’s what happens:
Have a read: http://devesh.net/blog/2008/06/06/an-arbitrary-incision/
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