Hold my hand and fall with me!
I might have, had you asked
But you didn’t
And I thought you wanted to fly
When I said I was leaving,
All you said was,
Goodbye!
If we had jumped,
Maybe you’d have discovered wings
Or I might’ve taught you to swim
Maybe we’d have crashed anyway….together.
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1Marielle
wrote on 17 October 2006 at 17:18
Really beautiful…
2sunshine
wrote on 18 October 2006 at 6:55
Somehow I’ve always loved the thought provoking nature of your posts, with so curt words yet all laden with meaning. Seems to me I’m reciting the story of my life.
3ideasmith
wrote on 18 October 2006 at 10:31
@ Marielle, Sunshine: Thank you!
4sundar
wrote on 18 October 2006 at 12:14
reminds me of a jagjit/chitra ghazal…
Duniya Jise kahte hai jadoo ka khilona hai,
mil jaaye tho mitti hai, kho jaaye tho sona hai…
5Rajni
wrote on 18 October 2006 at 20:12
gurl, my house is open- so’s my refrigerator- and it’s stacked with Ice-cream
6Brad
wrote on 18 October 2006 at 22:15
@Rajni: Can I come too, please! Your refrigerator also has beer, right!
7ideasmith
wrote on 19 October 2006 at 10:30
@ Rajni: What’d I do without you, gal? * I get by…with a little help…from my friends…wooohooohooo…*
@ Brad: Stay out! Ladeez wonly!
8Rajni
wrote on 19 October 2006 at 16:48
Brad: i only let poepl who have the time to call me come qand visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, voks and bailey’s Irish as well.
9Rajni
wrote on 19 October 2006 at 16:49
Brad: i only let people who have the time to call me come and visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, vodka and bailey’s Irish as well.
10ideasmith
wrote on 20 October 2006 at 14:54
Rajni: I’ll take Bailey’s please….I’m going off the rest for awhile.
11Brad
wrote on 20 October 2006 at 20:09
@Rajni: I’ll take the rest. I don’t like Bailey’s anyway.
12confusedsoul
wrote on 29 October 2006 at 19:45
very poignant!!!
13'nonnymus
wrote on 13 March 2007 at 13:42
Might I say tht wht I smtimes DONT like abt wht u write is that it touches? a bit too deep?
lol..
14ideasmith
wrote on 13 March 2007 at 14:27
@ Confusedsoul: Thank you. The situation that inspired the post was, too.
@ ‘nonnymous: That’s a mighty compliment. And its heartening to know other people have been where I was, too.
15'nonnymus
wrote on 13 March 2007 at 15:29
Ideasmith: maybe more like Im about to rather than been there… and im hoping i’ll have a diff story to tell.
16ideasmith
wrote on 13 March 2007 at 21:09
@ ‘nonnymus: All the very best to you then! Just for the record, the story above didn’t turn out too badly. One jumped and flew away and the other took a swim. They just went in different directions, that’s all.
17someonearbit
wrote on 22 April 2007 at 15:49
beautifulllll