Hold my hand and fall with me!
I might have, had you asked
But you didn’t
And I thought you wanted to fly
When I said I was leaving,
All you said was,
Goodbye!
If we had jumped,
Maybe you’d have discovered wings
Or I might’ve taught you to swim
Maybe we’d have crashed anyway….together.
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Posted in Waxing eloquent | Comments (17)
October 17th, 2006 at 5:18 pm
Really beautiful…
October 18th, 2006 at 6:55 am
Somehow I’ve always loved the thought provoking nature of your posts, with so curt words yet all laden with meaning. Seems to me I’m reciting the story of my life.
October 18th, 2006 at 10:31 am
@ Marielle, Sunshine: Thank you!
October 18th, 2006 at 12:14 pm
reminds me of a jagjit/chitra ghazal…
Duniya Jise kahte hai jadoo ka khilona hai,
mil jaaye tho mitti hai, kho jaaye tho sona hai…
October 18th, 2006 at 8:12 pm
gurl, my house is open- so’s my refrigerator- and it’s stacked with Ice-cream
October 18th, 2006 at 10:15 pm
@Rajni: Can I come too, please! Your refrigerator also has beer, right!
October 19th, 2006 at 10:30 am
@ Rajni: What’d I do without you, gal? * I get by…with a little help…from my friends…wooohooohooo…*
@ Brad: Stay out! Ladeez wonly!
October 19th, 2006 at 4:48 pm
Brad: i only let poepl who have the time to call me come qand visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, voks and bailey’s Irish as well.
October 19th, 2006 at 4:49 pm
Brad: i only let people who have the time to call me come and visit! and yes- not just beer, it has wine, vodka and bailey’s Irish as well.
October 20th, 2006 at 2:54 pm
Rajni: I’ll take Bailey’s please….I’m going off the rest for awhile.
October 20th, 2006 at 8:09 pm
@Rajni: I’ll take the rest. I don’t like Bailey’s anyway.
October 29th, 2006 at 7:45 pm
very poignant!!!
March 13th, 2007 at 1:42 pm
Might I say tht wht I smtimes DONT like abt wht u write is that it touches? a bit too deep?
lol..
March 13th, 2007 at 2:27 pm
@ Confusedsoul: Thank you. The situation that inspired the post was, too.
@ ‘nonnymous: That’s a mighty compliment. And its heartening to know other people have been where I was, too.
March 13th, 2007 at 3:29 pm
Ideasmith: maybe more like Im about to rather than been there… and im hoping i’ll have a diff story to tell.
March 13th, 2007 at 9:09 pm
@ ‘nonnymus: All the very best to you then! Just for the record, the story above didn’t turn out too badly. One jumped and flew away and the other took a swim. They just went in different directions, that’s all.
April 22nd, 2007 at 3:49 pm
beautifulllll